Words, Words, Words!
I’ve been MIA in the blog world for almost the entire week. Someone asked me if I was ok in my comments on the last post and no worries, I am. Everything is fine and no I didn’t have any chocolate cake. I didn’t have any cake at all. In fact, I’m under-eating although it’s not really on purpose, it’s just that when you’re body is used to a constant stream of chocolate muffins, potato chips and (soda)pop the switch to eating healthy is hard to balance. I’m not hungry usually, and if I am I’ve been eating some fruit or whole wheat crackers. And while that’s good for my health it’s a significantly smaller amount of calories than what I should be consuming to lose weight at a healthy rate.
The plus side to that is, hopefully I’ll lose a big chunk of weight (5-7 pounds) within the first week or two and my calorie intake will drop to a rate that is easier to balance. But enough of boring caloric calculations.
Why was I gone then? Well, I was reading Brisingr, the third book in a cycle of four that I’ve been waiting about 4 years to come out. It’s an immense book and I was reading for almost 3 days straight. If you’re a fantasy lover I recommend it but otherwise I doubt most people would like it. It has a tendency to drag in several parts and the first book in particular is not incredibly well written.
Granted the author, Christopher Paolini was 15 when he wrote the original, and when I first read Eragon I took that into account and was highly impressed despite the rambling, overly complicated, “look I can use grown-up words” style used by Paolini. Later I did a little research and found out that Paolini’s parents published his novel themselves and eventually it was picked up by Alfred A. Knopf and republished in 2003.
Quite frankly, Paolini would have done himself a favor to go back through Eragon as a 20 year old and perhaps redraft it as a writer with 5 extra years of experience because it does read like a young teen wrote it, as far as exacerbated vocabulary and a lack of certain character aspects, but that’s besides the point. Paolini’s style has improved since then, although not enough that I’d call him a fantastic or highly gifted writer. He’s pegged his genre though and I’m sure he’ll continue to have success as a fantasy writer.
Anywho, regardless of the skill of the writer, I’ve become invested in the plot and the characters and I plowed through the book at my usual “I’ve been waiting for this to come out for years” pace resulting in a lot of empty space on my blog.
Oh, yeah, and 2 days ago I submitted my entry to The Writing Game, hosted by Brillig over at Blogger’s Annex. I’m not sure when it will actually be posted as there are som eglitches right now on the site, but Brillig is in posession of my 6 page story and she’ll hopefully put it up there when she’s able.
I hope you all take a chance to go and read it, and yes I’m aware of the plot inconsistency regarding the occupation of the father character. I write the story in one day and it’s the first draft. Procrastinate later, right?
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I have actually really wanted to read Eragon, so I was quite interested in what you had to say about it. I didn’t know he was 15.
And I am not going to jump on the bossy-bandwagon, but I will say I have just proved over the last month that *under eating* will not get very far, so do be careful. On w/w, the minimum pointage is 16. I was on 12 for the last three weeks, just to get rid of that last four stupid pounds. I have gone back to 16 because a) 12 SUCKS and b) i didn’t lose ANY weight that way. ANY. Although I did punch a few people, so I felt better from that.
Hey– just wanted to say I have been lurking on your blog for awhile and I enjoy your writing! I am living in Leiden, in the Netherlands and appreciate your critiques of local culture. In fact, I found you while searching for more info on Zwarte Piet…
Same comment as Zerilda, don’t go undereating now, it’s to no use. It is better to loose weight slowly then to undereat and loose it fast, it will all come back in the end….
Good luck!
I love nothing more than reading a good book. I hate when I am done as it feels like I’m ending a wonderful relationship way too soon.
I really got out of the fantasy genre a few years back, but my 14-year-old loved Eragon. I may have to check it out.
I’ve been MIA, too. So much going on I’ve lost the ability to put words together. Here’s hoping both our lives get a little bit less crazy.
I’m going to the annex now…
Oooh… I can’t wait to read your story!